Feedback on my Rough Edit and changes made towards Final Edit X

After receiving my feedback, which included:

blog feedback:

• Similarly, the research tab presents very general research-there needs to be more specific references to documentaries you have studied.

• The blog is very text-heavy. Annotated images throughout would help overcome this.

• Correct spelling throughout, please!

• Ensure all postings use original photography from your Advanced Portfolio.

• You should take the advice in the 3 bullet points above for postings that are still being written.

front cover feedback:

• The central image could do with some cropping and a useful relevant quote to draw the audience to the main feature.

• The title and associated image need to link more clearly with the content below perhaps by surrounding it with the grey that surrounds the main part of the feature

• Add some images that are associated with the other cover stories.

• Ensure English spelling is correct throughout. It's Ukraine, not Ukraine!

Article Feedback:

• Greater focus on Coco as The Well Maker. Make him the subject of the story

• Use some quotes from him and his experiences to add flavor and color

• Consider using some background images and other screenshots you have from your footage.

• Formalize the columns more effectively so they appear naturalized.

After reading my teacher's feedback I got into work and fixed everything.